It’s cruel, when you think of it,
The way that we live,
Forget about trust and teamwork,
Always take, never give,
We play the games we play,
We fight the battles we fight,
Another chip off the board,
Out goes another light,
There is too much self-interest,
Too much emphasis on personal gain,
Once those two take a step back,
Harmony may have a chance to reign
Great post! Very positive! I wish more people could see that! 😉
I agree. We need to make a change.
‘We’ need to change, and then, we could ‘make’ a change. 🙂
Beautifully said and true.
Loved it! ❤
Thanks! I was going for a short poem, something simple and powerful.
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My goodness, I am flattered! Thank you so much!
You are welcome! =D
Very good! I love it. Since I love your blog, here’s another award<3
So here, here's your One Inspirational Blog Award –
Haha, wow again? Thanks for giving me another shot :P. You were picked twice for your beautiful blogger thingy?
Very good sentiment. Very great thoughts. Thanks for being inspirational. We all need that.
Thank you, I try my best. 🙂
This is a powerful poem! The words are simply but very striking! Keep writing! 😀
– karen
*simple not simply. Haha! Typo. Sorry. 🙂
I got that, but nice of you to do that anyway haha. I hate it when I make typos. =/
Thanks!
Beautifully said 🙂
Thanks. I was going for simplicity.
Love it!!!
Thank you!
I just like it so much,.. very subtle yet moving! =))
Much of my poetry is a lot longer and more intricate, so I went simple this time… thank you.
your such a deep person>
Hah, we are all deep people. It’s just depends on how much of our spirituality we choose to explore.
And (in About Me it says) you’re 14? Dude! You’ve got some serious brains and talent there. Excellent work.
Thank you! I hope you stick around to read some of my stuff, because I don’t want my age to be the sole factor in how people judge my work.